One day

[ارؤي.]

Did you ever meet some one so special? I did. It was last season. When my unite ( my dad's sister) wanted us to go to her. She live in New York city. I was so happen to go there. By that time I got used to my Yemeni side. My father's family are so different from my mothe's family. I love them boht. Let me get to my point. Metting some one so different in everything. It was Sunday. When I met that Yemeni girl. She had a great smile on her face. For some reason I felt that she was so different from all the girls around. Every one seem to love her. I was looking at her all time. She looked to powerful and strong. My unite and evey one was talking about her or with her. I went to viste the school that she was in. There I saw what my eyes didn't believe. Her name was ever where. Posters and poems writen by her about Islam and Muslims. Every one honored her for who she is. I did to. She had her own style of dresseing and talking. Plus her hijab. She was young, but she knew a lot of things. Almost about everthing. Religion played a big role in her life. You can tell from looking at her. I think of her every day. And ask me self a qutions. Why was she so different in everything. I wented to share this with you because I felt that every one should know her. She was a girl that ever person will like to met. It was an honor to me because I meet her. I felt that I'm so priod of been a Yemeni girl because I met a girl like her from Yemen
I will like to give this poem a gift to her and wishing her the best in her dealy life.
What's up? Yemeni girl did you know that you changed my world
After meting you
I had the power that you thought me of
Power of peace and word
If I ever wish to have a sister
It was that momant when I met you
Soory brothers and sisters I know that it was a long post
But I really missed her. I wish that I can met her again. I know that I would be so happy. Because I love you all I wanted you all to met her too:HEARTS1:

[range rover]

thank u, arwy it,s nice

[ارؤي.]

thank u, arwy it,s nice

Thank you too for passing by

[abadface.]

جميل أن نحظى بأناس يمثلون الوجه المتحضر من أمتنا

شكراً لجهدك الملحوظ

[محمدالحامد]

u will meet her again insha allah

THX



M

[ارؤي.]

جميل أن نحظى بأناس يمثلون الوجه المتحضر من أمتنا

شكراً لجهدك الملحوظ

The you for passing by bro

[ارؤي.]

u will meet her again insha allah

THX



M

Thank for passing by and for make hope for me
I hope you will met a friend like her one day

[محمدالحامد]

Thank for passing by and for make hope for me
I hope you will met a friend like her one day

I don`t think so

but insha Allah
THX


M

[ارؤي.]

I don`t think so

but insha Allah
THX


M

Why not. Life is ful of good people you just have to be around them:M11: and call them to be with you

[ألــوان]

hella you sweet little pumpkin.
okay well first of all...this was an amazing try...and it was a very touching story,,,but forgive me ... i 've got to be honest with you...
sweetheart...let me just point out some of ur mistakes.. both spelling and gramer...they're not much...yet they'd be helpful to you in the future.

and if u didnt like my corrections then i apoligize in advance.
now shall we begin?

Did you ever meet some one so special? I did. It was last season. When my unite ( my dad's sister) wanted us to go to her. She live in New York city. I was so happen to go there. By that time I got used to my Yemeni side. My father's family are so different from my mothe's family. I love them boht. Let me get to my point. Metting some one so different in everything. It was Sunday. When I met that Yemeni girl. She had a great smile on her face. For some reason I felt that she was so different from all the girls around. Every one seem to love her. I was looking at her all time. She looked to powerful and strong. My unite and evey one was talking about her or with her. I went to viste the school that she was in. There I saw what my eyes didn't believe. Her name was ever where. Posters and poems writen by her about Islam and Muslims. Every one honored her for who she is. I did to. She had her own style of dresseing and talking. Plus her hijab. She was young, but she knew a lot of things. Almost about everthing. Religion played a big role in her life. You can tell from looking at her. I think of her every day. And ask me self a qutions. Why was she so different in everything. I wented to share this with you because I felt that every one should know her. She was a girl that ever person will like to met. It was an honor to me because I meet her. I felt that I'm so priod of been a Yemeni girl because I met a girl like her from Yemen
I will like to give this poem a gift to her and wishing her the best in her dealy life.
What's up? Yemeni girl did you know that you changed my world
After meting you
I had the power that you thought me of
Power of peace and word
If I ever wish to have a sister
It was that momant when I met you
Soory brothers and sisters I know that it was a long post
But I really missed her. I wish that I can met her again. I know that I would be so happy. Because I love you all I wanted you all to met her too:HEARTS1:

i noticed a lot of mistakes when writing meet..
also when writing everything, everyone, eveywhere, and such...u tend to seperate the words and make them into two words.
also when u say "father's and my mother's" you here make it seem like you're saying father is family...but your actually saying fathers family so this is the wrong way to using the ' or what is known as apostraphe.

now let me copy past some mistakes and write their corrections..

you wrote "unite" and the right word is aunt.
you wrote "happen" and the right word is happy.
you wrote "she live" and the write way of writing it is she lives...because she is still living in N.Y.C.


i know i left some without corrections but i guess they're very self explanatory.
i hope i didn't bother you with my interference.

now be good and keep writing...and may god bless all his mankind.

[ارؤي.]

hella you sweet little pumpkin.
okay well first of all...this was an amazing try...and it was a very touching story,,,but forgive me ... i 've got to be honest with you...
sweetheart...let me just point out some of ur mistakes.. both spelling and gramer...they're not much...yet they'd be helpful to you in the future.

and if u didnt like my corrections then i apoligize in advance.
now shall we begin?





i noticed a lot of mistakes when writing meet..
also when writing everything, everyone, eveywhere, and such...u tend to seperate the words and make them into two words.
also when u say "father's and my mother's" you here make it seem like you're saying father is family...but your actually saying fathers family so this is the wrong way to using the ' or what is known as apostraphe.

now let me copy past some mistakes and write their corrections..

you wrote "unite" and the right word is aunt.
you wrote "happen" and the right word is happy.
you wrote "she live" and the write way of writing it is she lives...because she is still living in N.Y.C.


i know i left some without corrections but i guess they're very self explanatory.
i hope i didn't bother you with my interference.

now be good and keep writing...and may god bless all his mankind.

Sister thank you so much. I wish that you can fix my Arabic because it's so bad. English is my first language. SOme times it;s a typing mistake. I don't view my posts before posting them. SO I didn't fix any of them, but that tell's me that you know English. Which is great. Thanx and keep in touch

[ألــوان]

Sister thank you so much. I wish that you can fix my Arabic because it's so bad. English is my first language. SOme times it;s a typing mistake. I don't view my posts before posting them. SO I didn't fix any of them, but that tell's me that you know English. Which is great. Thanx and keep in touch

am glad i didnt bother u with my corrections..
and i'll be more than glad to correct ur arabic spelling as well...u can also ask others to correct ur spelling for u my dear...since i'm not here all the time.

best wishes to u...and good luck with everything.