YOU - Written by Me

[السندريلا]

YOU

Me…
That tearful eye
That tired body
The light which swiftly
Disappeared
That garden where its flowers
Wilted
You…
That beautiful thing
That burst into the dark
Bravely
Amazing me
You…
That lily
Which planted herself in my heart
Strongly and innocently
You…
That beautiful feeling
Which spread into my soul
Without warning
You and I…
Two agreed and sealed
To be nothing but One.

[ألــوان]

wow...that is an amazing poem..
honestly...it's so soothing and relaxing

thanx hun

[السندريلا]

wow...that is an amazing poem..
honestly...it's so soothing and relaxing

thanx hun

Thanks sis
I'm glad you like it dear
thanks for passing

[الرهيب]

that's great
nice poem
i'll keep it !*if u don't mind?

salam

[السندريلا]

that's great
nice poem
i'll keep it !*if u don't mind?

salam

Thnx alot .....
I don't mind u can keep it .. it's a pleasure
see ya

[نسمة ليـــل]

That beautiful feeling
Which spread into my soul
Without warning

i liked this part more * nice and its very romantic poem
thank you Sandrilla

[Mr-LiNuXX]

هههههههههههههه
مع اني ما عندي سالفة بالانجليزي بس حاولت استوعب وش الي موجود ومحاولاتي كلها بائت بالفشل
thats great
best wishes
doctor heart
see you later

[السندريلا]

That beautiful feeling
Which spread into my soul
Without warning

i liked this part more * nice and its very romantic poem
thank you Sandrilla

Some words are meant to touch the hearts of some people
Glad the some of my own words touched your heart.
Welcome anytime Nesma

[السندريلا]

هههههههههههههه
مع اني ما عندي سالفة بالانجليزي بس حاولت استوعب وش الي موجود ومحاولاتي كلها بائت بالفشل
thats great
best wishes
doctor heart
see you later

It's ok* thanks for passing anyway Heart's Doctor

[Dr Sam]

As for me* Cindy*
What I could see more than that lightened words is the touched real feeling. I believe that words like these are very hard to be explained in such a nice way as you did.
…
I am not amazed because this is always you.
You are just great…
Keep it up* and never give-up this much-less feeling and rare talents. We all miss this thing now a days. Just move forward* girl…
…
Regs.

[السندريلا]

As for me* Cindy*
What I could see more than that lightened words is the touched real feeling. I believe that words like these are very hard to be explained in such a nice way as you did.
…
I am not amazed because this is always you.
You are just great…
Keep it up* and never give-up this much-less feeling and rare talents. We all miss this thing now a days. Just move forward* girl…
…
Regs.

Thank you Dr Sam*
One likes to be complimented especially as beginner as I am. It's a pleasure to get as sweet replies to my writing efforts* with these words you encourage me to write more and put more things of my writings.
Thank you very much and I'm so glad that you read my efforts either you compliment or criticize it's ok I'll learn to write even better.
Best regards
Cindy

[Dr Sam]

Cindy*
That was so kind of you to put yourself humbly in a dark corner and not to be noticed by other people. But sometimes this is not good for us. If you wanna consider this as a criticize let be so. By the way* whenever I open this site-page* the first thing I do it more every time is looking for your contributions. You know why?
I tell you…
A lot of people that we can see every time around us* they move* they go* they write* they do activities of all other people. And out of that huge number of billions who live and do their things* there are just very few people and they can be counted on fingers who leave something unordinary inside of us. Whether it can be through their writings* works* songs* etc…
I think that you are one of those who can leave their fingerprints on something they worked hard on one-day and after years later* they can tell their stories to their grand sons and daughters to be little candles can lightening their way and generations will come in the dark ages may come years from now.
If I want to ask you something which I don’t know you may do it or not* this thing will be “please* try to burn all the power that you have as much as you can* that the more you burn it* the more you warm others lives. Try to release all the sadness and kept emotions and not to size them. Bird in a golden cage still in a prison and needs to fly very high to amaze us with his/her nice songs and pure feelings”
Keep it up and I wish you all best wishes. Whenever you need any help from a beginner too* I am available for you.

Note: I don’t think you need a teacher.

Regs*