Alsalam alikom brother Mr_Saboor.
Its really nice and heart worming to see you hear with us, in our small family group after all. I hope that you’ll like it here. :36_3_12:
In your 1st poem : I really liked what u said at the end
I hope no wind takes you over
Remember the angels on your shoulders
Better remain the faithful boulder cause
Desire blows the thorn
Because I think HOPE AND FAITH are very important elements of humans spirits, with out them………………we’r just shadows
In your 2nt poem Pray: well…………………..the whole thing just beautiful……..
In your 3rd poem The Soldier:
Wonderful peace brother,……and I only can add…..we all should look at our selves throw the eyes of others, and than we might find a solution to the human selfish nature
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